| 1. | Both times, the Miami Valley group found the rewording unacceptable.
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| 2. | Often, a simple rewording will satisfy all editors'concerns.
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| 3. | This was no great rework; just rewording here and there.
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| 4. | Suggestions for improving subjective language and rewording would be very helpful.
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| 5. | The second two bullets have been addressed by rewording the sentences.
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| 6. | If it is not important, a rewording is in order.
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| 7. | Need a more contrastive word ( ? )-worth rewording.
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| 8. | Rewording changes nothing as it still has the same copied structure.
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| 9. | And I agree with you about the rewording being an improvement.
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| 10. | Both times, the Miami Valley group found the rewording unacceptable
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